Types of letter：Suggestion
•Compared with complaint letter,this type of letter provides reasonable advice to improve something other thantelling existing problems. The tone should be softer than complaint.
•Generally the opening would beself introduction and intention statement. Then you should explain why thissuggestion is feasible with a polite ending.
•I write with my suggestionabout …
•I would like to express myviews on …
•Your service is excellent;however, …
•I feel that it would bebeneficial if …
•I feel that it would be moreefficient if …
•I hope you will find thesesuggestions helpful in improving …
•If you have anything unclearabout the situation, I would …
Authentic question 1
Youwent to see a good film but you cannot enjoy it because some problems in thecinema. Write a letter to the cinema manager. You should say:
•what and when you watched
•what problem you experienced in the cinema
•tell the manage what he should do
Writeat least 150 words.
Youdo NOT need to write any addresses.
Model response 1
Dear Sir orMadam,
I am writing to make some proposals withregard to the problems I went through in your cinema. Last week, I watched thefilm named The Fast and the Furious 7 with my sister in auditorium 4.
It was expected to be perfect for the filmis so good and we got two IMAX tickets. As the movie started, we found thesound is too loud, especially when the engine roars or there is a gun fight. Wehave to cover our ears once some exciting scenes appeared. It really distractedus from concentrating on the film. Besides, many people take photos with theirflash turned on. It’s understandable for people to capture some moments theyconsider as special, but strong light is too distracting. As what I havementioned above, it would be so kind of you to lower the volume a bit. And I dosuggest it would be necessary to put up a sign in prominent positions as Ididn’t see any. 接下来为大家介绍"描述雅思零基础小作文建议信写作5分范文分析2"
Thank you for your time to read through thewhole letter. I hope it will help to make a better experience for people toenjoy films here.