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贵阳海外艺术留学培训解疑雅思口语精讲系列part2-描述一个有创造力的音乐家或发明家

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摘要:接下来为大家介绍解疑雅思口语精讲系列part2-描述一个有创造力的音乐家或发明家 雅思口语精讲系列part2-描述一个有创造力的音乐家或发明家 Part Two 话题精讲 Describe a creative musician
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雅思口语精讲系列part2-描述一个有创造力的音乐家或发明家

Part Two 话题精讲

  Describe a creative musician / inventor

  You should say :

  Who the person is?

    What he/she does?How you know him?

    Why you think he/she's creative ?

高分参考:

  1.I ‘d like to talk about jay chow , who’s one of the most decorated musicians in Taiwan . in recent years ,he’s won numerous music awards . In my opinion , what makes him so outstanding is his talent in composing music and writing lyrics . later , i'll tell you about it .

  2.It’s said that he’s a typical workaholic .So I guess his schedule must be filled with work ,for example : he needs to perform at concerts , attend some important music events . Besides working hard , he still devotes a lot of time doing charity .He’s helped many homeless children and people with disabilities .

  3.As to how I know him . well , he’s a celebrity , a household name in my country . Many years ago , when I was in high school , he’s already made his name . His CDs could be sold out in a few hours . People waited in line to buy tickets to his concerts . Those days were crazy .

  4.Lastly , I'll tell you about why i think he's so creative . He’s a full package . He not only sings well , but also writes a number of bestselling songs . He successfully adds Chinese elements , like : kung Fu , into his lyrics , perfectly combining Chinese culture with modern music style . That’s incredible .

高分语料解析:

  1. I ‘d like to talk about jay chow , who’s one of the most decorated musicians in Taiwan: 这是一个标准的高分开头, 有词组,有复合句型, 有适当的形容词, 加分的!

  2. most decorated musician: 获奖很多的音乐人 (decorated 这个词在形容音乐人或者艺术家的时候很常用。表示获奖很多的。加分词!)

  3. numerous music awards :无数的音乐奖项

  4. what makes him so outstanding is his talent in composing music and writing lyrics: 让他如此杰出的是他在作词谱曲中的天赋。

  5. later , i will tell you about it: 这是一句常用的连接句。在雅思口语考试中, 没有适当的链接的话是没有办法拿到coherence的分数的。

  6. typical workaholic: 典型的工作狂

  7. perform at concerts: (大家来学一学标准的表达吧)做演唱会

  8. attend some important music events:参加重要的音乐盛典

  9. Besides working hard , he still devotes a lot of time doing charity : 除了工作极其努力之外, 他还把很多的时间贡献给了慈善事业。

  10. homeless children:无家可归的儿童

  11. people with disabilities:残疾人士

  12. As to how I know him: 连接句(有时候可以用as to 加上问题的方式来引出下文,拿连贯度的分数)

  13. he’s a celebrity , a household name in my country:他在我们国家是名人,一个家喻户晓的名字。

  14. made his name: 成名(很好的词组!有加分的!)

  15.His CDs could be sold out in a few hours . People waited in line to buy tickets to his concerts :他的cd会在几小时内卖完, 人们排长队买他演唱会的票子。

  16.Lastly , I'll tell you why i think he's so creative:连接句 (拿连贯度的分数)

  17.He’s a full package: 他是个全才 (full package 是个很好的词组, 加分词!)

18.He successfully adds Chinese elements , like : kung Fu , into his lyrics , perfectly combining Chinese culture with modern music style . that’s incredible:他成功的把中国元素比如中国功夫加入到他的歌词中,把中国文化和流行音乐完美的融合在了一起(这个解释那么地道, 加分句!)


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